Thread:Peashooter9999/@comment-29456569-20170701211254

Hi again Pea,

You really need to start using capital letters at the beginning of any sentences, and for each important word in a heading, for example, The Last Giant instead of the last giant, and Superhuman Strength rather than superhuman strength. Also, try to limit headings to things like "Strengths and Weaknesses" rather than have a heading for each, unless you can add 3 or more for each one. A heading like "Extras" is usually better named as "Trivia" or "Notes."

On a personal level, can I ask what exams you took? And at what level? I'm just nosy about the people that I work with. I'm 39, work in a kitchen job, and am married with five pets. One of my previous pets, little Wicket, is my profile pic.

One last thing: unless you're absolutely sure about something, it's best to leave Devo's articles alone. They're usually incredibly well-researched, beyond anything you or me might do, and he's quite protective about them for good reason.

Anyway, hope this helps,

Fil 